A reader comments on the first chapter of Temperance Hill after reading it on Fictionpress.com
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3101097/1/Journal-of-Desire-Chapters-1-2-3
"I loved this chapter, its so full of life, wonder, and emotion. I do realize this is a romance and I do enjoy that fact.
"I found myself smiling the whole time I read this and it kept my interest the entire time. I even found myself laughing at many moments throughout the chapter thus far. It is a very superb book and I really love what the book has to offer so far.
"The little joke of Helene F-word was very funny. I found myself laughing at that for quite awhile.
" There is a lot of charm and charisma to this book and I love it like any person who would be lucky to read this delightful book. So far the characters are vibrant and full of life, practically jump off the page. It is very delightful to see this book. I really, really love this book so far.
"I hope you continue your fiction very soon. The way you describe your characters allows me a great way to picture the characters appearance and I like that as well.
"I don't know what to say, it is brilliant comes to my mind so far. I think I'll follow the story and keep my eyes on you."
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